Oh, I'm relieved and delighted that the multiple timelines worked for you. It was a juggling act, and sometimes it was difficult to tell whether I'd managed to keep all the balls in the air. Also *smirk* I did see the humor in converting Lily to the transgressive pleasures of Snarrydom. It appealed to me on a meta level, which was something that informed this fic, anyway, with its metaphor of life as a TV show and its cross-commentary on canon's end. Not that that was the point of the fic, but I couldn't help noticing how Lily's position paralleled the reader's, in a way. I'm also chuffed that you enjoyed the snark. It's so essential to this pairing, but it can be a challenge to write. Fun, but daunting.
Thank you for taking a chance on a cracky summary and for such marvelous feedback!