Oh, that was a great story. Harry's horror at finding the body was very well done, and I loved the way Severus was written - I had to keep reminding myself he wasn't a teenager! Albus Severus was a fantastic character, too. I would have liked to have seen more of Severus regaining his memories, and how it affected him and his relationship with Harry.
There seem to be a few small chunks of text missing and/or misplaced, however.