I lived two years in North Queensland, and noticed no blunders at all. Well done. A lovely fic, although I'm sill pressing my lips firmly together & ignoring the way my stomach feels - a response to discovering the location of Neville's missing parts! I do like the way you've presented Harry - he comes across well. And although the reader doesn't actually spend much time with the conscious aware Snape, he's convincingly presented. I like the little details - the eight pulls on the dreads for the eight missing years - Snape's insane toxic cocktail... it all adds up to a great story.