Thanks for the lovely comments! Yes, I can see that the kids may have sounded a bit too mature. I ran the story by a few people with kids that age and they assured me they sounded appropriate, but I did ponder that... Still, I'm pretty pleased with how it turned out in the end. And yes, after all that I simply HAD to make Harry and Severus get it for themselves, seemed only fair. *g* I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)