Wow, this is a very impressive story! It filled me with a feeling of Yes, we can!, if we only work together.^^ I love your Harry; still determined and headstrong, but much more mature and much less clueless than Canon-Harry. He is really wonderful! I also loved your Severus, all self-loathing and bitter and then Harry comes along and helps him to forgive himself!>///< The sex scene is sublime (I'm such, such, SUCH a sucker for bottom!Snape.^^ And what Harry says he wants to do with Sev is drool-worthy!^.^), and Snape's lists "Why I should / should not have sex with Harry" are hilarious!^___^ The Oath Magic is wonderful as well (as is Harry's first reaction^^), and Harry's letter to every grown-up magical being is great! His ideas and the things he criticises moved me and made me think and want to do something against the injustice!^^ Really a fantastic story with a surprising Harry and an adorable Severus. (I'd like to say "Well done!", but that sound condescending... so I'll say "I love it!" instead.^-^) Bye, prayer:-*