This is so wonderful! You’ve created such an intricate, fully-realized, and rich world after death. The characters retain many of their flaws, but the smarter ones have learned from their previous life, and this 'second chance,' so to speak, is miraculous.
Your Snape is persuasive and convincing, as are Tobias and Eileen, you have really worked through their interfamilial-dynamics, and come up with a superbly redeemable lot.
I was unsure of the story at the beginning, thinking the fic was going to be too dark for me. I have to say that you treated the characters harshly, but gave reasons for their suffering, and used it as a ‘refiner’s fire.’
The ending, with them all welcoming Al back was perfect!
Beautifully conceived and written, I can’t wait to find out who you are so I can bookmark this under your real name!