That was amazing! You did a fantastic job at melting the different universes. I loved your version of the afterlife, its rules and regulations and its possibilities. Your interpretation of Elysium especially was great. The homophobic guards - priceless! And your portrait of Dumbledore - just wow! That's how I imagine him to be, the old scheming bastard, already at the top of the world again. And Sirius - yes! Not a small feat, including the whole HP universe with Death Eaters, Marauders and Voldemort into a mix of Norse and Greek afterlife myths and make it all fit so well. Absolutely, stunningly brilliant!
I loved your portrayal of the Snape family. Eileen's friendship with the Norns is so fitting, and I really really liked Tobias. I wish he could have been saved, but his fate was wonderfully appropriate.
And how I love your Harry with his rent boys, and your Snape who can't let go. They're perfect!