Thank you so, so much -- I'm thrilled you liked Severus's internal remarks, and that you enjoyed all the supporting characters who made appearances.
I love Ron and his intuitive or shrewd moments in canon (too bad we don't get those in the films!), so I'm especially happy to know you liked his appearance here as well as his off-stage warning to Ginny.
You know, I think Ginny's taste is probably pretty good! I think Snape is someone who wouldn't be so fond of pink. :D Actually, I kind of wanted to give Ginny a chance to wear pink, seeing as how Fleur ruled that out immediately because of her coloring with the bridesmaids' dresses. :D
Oh, thank you for that catch! I'll fix that issue when I archive.
I'll be archiving this soon-ish (at Skyehawke and The Archive) so I hope you'll enjoy re-reading!