Thank you for the wonderful present, dear Mysterious Writer! Lovely story. There are a lot of things I like particularly. I've raised an eyebrow for the OMC first but you really managed to win me by two things. 1. He was pretty much Sev-alike :D (At the beginning I've even thought he would turn out as Snape) 2. He couldn't betray Harry. I love that the source of the tension was not their relationship but a conflict from outside. I love Sev's protectiveness. I love the slow build of feelings. I love that Ron finally came around - you made me worry a bit :) And YAY! for Mpreg and Mpreg!smut :D Very nicely done, thanks!