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Anders Svartalfurinn (
svartalfur
) wrote in
snarry_holidays
,
You've got an excellent pacing here, and some great lines. I especially liked your characterisation of Snape:
He spent the next years distilling himself, refining himself, becoming, as the Dark Lord had named him, the potioneer.
And I'm thrilled to see Harry crying and not losing his masculinity:
He got to his feet slowly, looking somehow dignified as he wept. Severus hadn't seen a man, weeping, seem so strong.
Great job!
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