Wow! This fic is huuuuuge! I feel so bad now, cuz the fic I wrote for my recipiant wasn't nearly this long. The plot was very well done, and I liked the changes you made to accommodate the storyline to handle Harry's expulsion. Having Luna be the victim of Dolores's abuse was a surprise. I'd half expected it to be Neville, to be honest, but she was equally likely to have it happen to her. I copied the story into a text file and edited out all the errors, but also so I could keep it for myself once the fest was over. When the authors are finally revealed, I'd love the chance to get to talk with you, oh dear author, and go over some ideas with you. Your way of coming up with a great plot makes me green with envy! I can come up with great ideas, but finishing them? Not so much.