*speechless* That was absolutely, totally fantastic. I swear, I haven’t been so caught up in a fic for ages. The plot conceit of the Memorius Potion just worked so unbelievably well, and I totally fell in love with the Prince – who was recognisably Snape-ish, but with a glorious teen edge. The ‘kiss’ conversation via the book was absolutely perfect – and I felt so sad for Snape when I realised that he’d thought Harry’d just stopped writing when he admitted his feelings… but that there was no way of taking back the pain without screwing with time.
The main thing I loved about this fic was that the plot just worked so well. It was really gripping – I couldn’t wait to find out what happened next. It tied in so well with canon, while adding that extra wonderful Snarry edge. Their growing relationship was nicely handled, and worked so well for me – and the sex was pretty hot ::g:: The ending was just perfect as well.
Anonymous author, I’m so stalking you to read all the rest of your fics when this fest is over :) Thank you so much for allowing your fic to be regifted to me, and thank you mods for giving me such a wonderful treat! x (turns out I wasn’t so speechless after all, lol. Sorry for such a monster of a comment!)