Oh god you guys set the bar so high. It's hard, oh so hard, to read other fic in any other fandom, or any other pairing when you roll out pieces like this.
Honestly, you put canon to shame. If I ever need to prove to my friends that hp fandom is better than canon, I will definitely point them to your story.
The prose, the lingering ache and longing of the characters. I rarely ever read a story and go breathless after a while. This story is amazing, I will definitely reread it again and again in the future.