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snarrymod (snarrymod) wrote in snarry_games,
@ 2009-09-19 20:30:00

Entry tags:

art, snitch

Team Snitch Entry (ART): "A Tempest Brewing" by Lizardspots
Title: A Tempest Brewing
Artist: lizardspots
Team: Snitch
Genre(s): Mentor/Severitus (*Click for the Severitus Challenge*)
Prompt(s): Stormy Weather, The Long Goodbye
Rating/Warnings/Kinks: PG-13; Highlight if you wish to know: *AU/EWE; 7th Year Hogwarts, incestual kissing/groping!*
Artist's Notes/Disclaimers/Thank you to: My fourth time in the Games, and I was determined to keep up my running record of sequential pieces, despite travelling for 5 weeks, then coming home to a gutted out house and no privacy. In short, this comic has been the bane of my existence for the past few months!! Thank you to the Games mods for their endless patience, thank you to my fellow Snitch mates for their help with the dialogue (particularly joanwilder, naatz, and littleblackbow), and thank you to the plethora of people that I have wibbled at whist working on this piece. ♥ ♥ ♥
Media used: Pencil, embellished in Open Canvas.
Archiving/Usage permission, including the Tribute Video (only after the polls have closed and medals have been awarded): Icons: go wild! Archiving: only on WTP. Other stuff: please ask first. Tribute video: of course! :)

A Tempest Brewing by Lizardspots

Don't forget to vote and review!

MOD NOTE: POLL IS NOW CLOSED. THANK YOU FOR PARTICIPATING IN THE SNARRY GAMES.

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	torino10154 2009-09-20 12:40 pm UTC (link)
	Now that's my kind of Severitis! flails The rain is just wonderful, darkening every scene with it's gloom. But that kiss-the oh, so very wrong kiss. Fantastic work. (Reply to this)

	venturous 2009-09-20 12:42 pm UTC (link)
	ooooo iz mesmerized so ooooo ooooo beautiful, Ms. Leezard, so rich and wise and deep. So human, so elegant and so very, very, very poignant. Your Snarry leaps off the page for me, and may as well be canon, it reads so true. I <3 U (Reply to this)

	abigail89 2009-09-20 12:52 pm UTC (link)
	I'm sitting here listening to the rain pounding down outside my window. It only enhanced the GUH!ness of this fabulous comic. This was amazing: the angst! the hurt! the desperateness! the i-cannot-resist-you! Guh. The art is outstanding. Well done, fellow Snitcher! (Reply to this)

	themostepotente 2009-09-20 01:24 pm UTC (link)
	asdfjkl;asdfjkl; asdfjkl;asdfjkl; asdfjkl;asdfjkl; asdfjkl;asdfjkl; OMG, LIZARD this is HOT beyond all logic and reason ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Reply to this)

	plantinshadows 2009-09-20 01:36 pm UTC (link)
	oh my! lovely and angsty! I held my breath all the while looking at the pictures.. so intense!! (Reply to this)

	bethbethbeth 2009-09-20 01:37 pm UTC (link)
	This is fantastic, my dear. So much pain and so much desire ... and so impossible for Harry to leave. (Reply to this)

	lariope 2009-09-20 01:53 pm UTC (link)
	WOW. That was amazing. Intense and totally perfect in every way. (Reply to this)

whitecotton
2009-09-20 02:00 pm UTC (link)

If pencils were the measure of artistic talent, yours would be found in Ollivanders, laid upon a velvet cushion in the window!

This is magical: wonderful, special and truly breath-taking. So much texture and detail, such as Severus' belt and Harry's rolled sleeves, and the rain pouring down their faces, making Severus' hair hang limp. The depth of your shading, too. It carries the hearbreak, the despair so well. Oh, and it's also hot as a hot thing!

Very, very well done.

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	snapechic76 2009-09-20 02:15 pm UTC (link)
	Severitus usually doesn't do it for me, but guh... The kissing here was amazing. I could feel their desperation and longing. You are so talented. This was wonderful. (Reply to this)

	yivel 2009-09-20 02:27 pm UTC (link)
	This is sooo good. I love incest!Severitus, I love angst, I love b/w art, I love rain!! Their expressions are very well-drawn. Thank you so much for putting so much work into this, even though your past months haven't been ideal. (Reply to this)

	meglw0228 2009-09-20 03:07 pm UTC (link)
	Wow! This is amazing! I absolutely adore this piece of work! This is the first time out of all the fics and art that I want to give someone 100 points across the board instead of 9... (not saying I didn't like the others enough, and some definitely would've earned 50 but this went well beyond wonderful) Brilliant! (Reply to this)

	mimiheart 2009-09-20 03:18 pm UTC (link)
	So wrong, yet so right. I love it. :D (Reply to this)

	lost_stray_cat 2009-09-20 03:34 pm UTC (link)
	Wow, this is amazing! It's beautiful, it's passionate, it's great! (Reply to this)

	rons_pigwidgeon 2009-09-20 04:00 pm UTC (link)
	I'm going to ignore the Severitus part of this because it gives me squicks, lots and lots of semi-nauseous squicks. I loved the look of this! The artwork is beautiful and you could almost feel the rain dripping down your skin. Great job! (Reply to this)

	ivylady 2009-09-20 04:08 pm UTC (link)
	Wow. I love the rain (it perfectly complements the angst), and their faces are so expressive. When Harry says "I can't do this any more", the look in his eyes is so heartbreaking. Excellent work! (Reply to this)

prayer_at_night
2009-09-20 05:03 pm UTC (link)

Oh wow! This is intense and beautifully drawn and so... wrong and right at the same time.^^
I love the emotions on Snape's face, how desperate and helpless against his own desires/feelings he is.
Also adore this part of the dialogue: "You disgust me." "I know." "I can't do this anymore. It's wrong." "I don't care.", and the kiss, of course!^-^ And the rain, which makes the atmosphere so wonderfully angsty.^^
Um... great work, really! *adores you*

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	hogwartshoney 2009-09-20 06:18 pm UTC (link)
	Oh, where to start, where to start? Love the b/w. LOVE the constant rain........ Adore the 'because I didn't want to lose you' panel which is actually 3 panels which can actually work as 3 individual panels and still make SENSE... Kissing-in-rain-Snarry is MADE of GUH! and... AND A.N.D.... I could MARRY you for the panel of Harry's "I can't do this anymore" Seriously. Wedlock! (Reply to this)

	szefi 2009-09-20 06:38 pm UTC (link)
	Guh. Hot and wrong and brilliant. (Reply to this)

	nestinghedwig 2009-09-20 06:45 pm UTC (link)
	The pencil illustrations are wonderful, especially the rain, and the angsty expressions. Glad that you perservered through your RL challenges to survive another Games. (Reply to this)

	atypicalsnowman 2009-09-20 06:52 pm UTC (link)
	Snarry Severitus...Gah! I know it's wrong. And I mean wrong. But somehow... clears throat The rain here is beautiful and so are the two characters. Their faces, hands, just wonderfully drawn. And so incredibly hot. (Reply to this)

	nonajf 2009-09-20 08:46 pm UTC (link)
	Wonderful! I love how you've drawn Harry and Severus; they look very much like men, and you didn't prettify Snape! Plus all the detail work - buttons, rain drops, the rain in general - added such a depth. I also liked how you played with the frames of the comic; it really added to the tension. And the story! So hot. (Reply to this)

	gin_tonic 2009-09-20 08:50 pm UTC (link)
	My God, that's so brilliant! The art, the story behind it, and the kissing ... <3 And I love the way you drew this with the alternating small and big panels! (Reply to this)

	stellamoon 2009-09-20 10:07 pm UTC (link)
	Nice job. It's a bit squicky, but well...LOL! That's totally OK!!!! That kiss is pretty hot, regardless. You did a fabulous job of capturing the tension and the emotion in this. applauds (Reply to this)

	coerciveconsent 2009-09-21 12:31 am UTC (link)
	This is just too brilliant and too hot for me to form a coherent comment. So you get: UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF ♥ (Reply to this)

	secretsolitaire 2009-09-21 12:44 am UTC (link)
	Amazing! Love the way you draw the rain, and that close-up kiss, guh... (Reply to this)

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