Too beautiful, really. The scar, Harry's shoulder, Snape's nose, their eyes, the clothes with the blowing tatters, the weapons, the colors, their hair! It's all perfect. I don't know anything about FF except the name, but you did a great job of telling me a story. I can't stop gazing at the faces, and how youthful Harry appears beside Snape. Everything is so finished and neat, too, even the chaos of color in the back.