I adore the simplistic nature of this tale. Your writing style is smooth, deceptively effortless, and manages to capture and convey an image with few, well chosen words. Definitely not an easy style to master and yet you do so in such an accomplished manner.
This is a story to be savoured, its easy delight and intricacy to be relished time and time again. For that reason, this story has been added to my personal favourites list. Very well done indeed.