I have to say I giggles at your summary... we know all that other stuff happens in good snarry stories so just hit the high (and most crucial) points!! I adore this. The white streak in Severus' hair and the way his hair is draped over his shoulder, their pink tongue out to catch the last drops (that you KNOW they will share in a heated kiss, the suggestion of full nudity, the flush on his cheek, the treasure trail leading down from his navel... shall I go on? If I didn't work 50+ hrs a wk, didn't already have scads of WIP's, didn't have picart commitments on other comms... I'd love to write the story for this. I makes my muses chatter on! Sorry Snitches--I like this one!!