Wow. First person is hard enough but you through in all the challenges you could, didn't you? LOL I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this. The flavor of the time period came through brilliantly, with the beliefs and traditions of the culture so emotionally portrayed through Harry's pov.
Every nuance of their shared attributes tugs at the heart as they discover and re-discover their gifts. Your multiple employment of the prompts were as subtle as they were obvious. Awesome job.