I was worried starting this that being an Eygptian dunce I wouldn't appreciate all the nuances of the culture you were sure to brilliantly weave into your tale. Naturally, my fears were very unfounded...you used the imagery and history so skillfully I didn't need to be deeply familiar with this history to love your story!
They were both so wonderfully in character and they got to (sort of) ride off into the sunset together! Bravo and happy sigh! *high fives my teammate for an amazing fic*