mmmm... the sex was very very hot. I love your Severus, it's exactly as it is in the book and yet not (there's something about the insecurities but not quite insecurities that gets me though I'm probably not expressing myself correctly, hopefully you understand). I do however wish it were longer; I'd love to see the scene of Harry coming down and finding that Severus is a man again and probably taking his virginity as well ;).