Wow. What a clever premise. This was really disturbing in a couple of ways. One: because I am not a fan a fan of girl!Harry or Snily and yet I REALLY enjoyed it, and two: because you got the details so RIGHT. *g* Of course Harry is messed up. In that respect this story make perfect sense. I can definitely see him reacting like this after the war. As Loup mentions, the little things like Arthur getting sidetracked and Hermione's guilt, all read as very authentic. Thank you for the touch of hope at the end as well. I like to think that Harry is starting to adjust to himself again, with Snape's help. Well done!