I've always adored 'Harry as Lily' the few times I've read or seen art. You did such a great job with this. Harry's desperate desire to be Lily, whom everyone loved as well as Severus's ability to take what he wants and yet, he does seem like really he'd be happy with either Lily or Harry. The end really was great-Harry seems to be happier, accepting perhaps that he is Harry but chooses to be Lily Prince. It was hard to see him suffering, worrying about first running out of potion and then brewing it as well as the interactions with Arthur and Hermione. Great job!