I love the colours you use here, especially the richness of the blues. That cake is to die for, and OMG are they UNDER THE TABLE??!!
I really like the way Snape and Harry meld into each other, not exactly touching yet, but the desire and ... yes, the hunger and the urrrnnngggghhhhh juuuuuuuuuuuust before they do touch... it's so well portrayed here.