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snarrymod (snarrymod) wrote in snarry_games,
@ 2009-08-20 07:52:00

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Team Cauldron Entry (Fic): "Decoy" by Lilyseyes
Title: Decoy
Author: lilyseyes
Team: Cauldron
Genre(s): Crossdressing
Prompt(s): Man in Uniform ~ Consequences
Rating/Warnings/Kinks: NC-17 *Crossdressing, non-graphic Mpreg, semi-public!sex, wall!sex, rimming, fluff*
Word Count: +/- 10,800
Author Notes/Disclaimers/Betas: A/N: This fic wouldn't have been possible without florida_minxie who helped write, beta read, hand-held, and co-conspired through it all/ JKR owns the Potterverse — I just play in it. No money is made from these amateur works/Betas: rakina, whitecotton and sassy_cissa, Thank you so much! And thanks to alisanne and leela_cat for your help! *smooches*

Summary: Auror Harry Potter needs assistance from an unlikely source as he is given the assignment to be the decoy for a wizarding serial killer.

"Decoy"

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red_day_dawning
2009-08-20 04:16 pm UTC (link)

Guh! The cross-dressing was wonderfully sexy. I don't mind cross-dressing, but don't tend to seek it out - here, it's sizzling hot! And when Harry bent over in the alleyway...

I do like Severus continuing in the protector role so much. And your villian was an utter shock! Not at all who I was suspecting. Initially I'd thought a former DE perhaps. Then I suspected the poor innocent muggle copper.

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ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 02:32 am UTC

	eriador117 2009-08-20 04:17 pm UTC (link)
	Oh, I loved this :) Hot and fluffy with a bit of angst too. take care, Annette (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 02:33 am UTC

	lazlong 2009-08-20 04:29 pm UTC (link)
	Scheming Severus and uniform-obsessed Harry-Who-Doesn't-Hesitate to change his life - love them both, to bits. Thank You, Lilyseyes! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 02:33 am UTC

	stageira 2009-08-20 04:54 pm UTC (link)
	Oh man, let me count the kink!buttons you just pushed! :) Cross-dressing, mpreg, rimming AND fluff! flails incoherently As always delightful and exceptionally fluffy! :) Just what I need this afternoon! smishes you hard and twirls you (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 02:36 am UTC

	florida_minxie 2009-08-20 05:00 pm UTC (link)
	Hee! It's up! twirls you You know I love this already, yes? Good show, darling!! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 02:38 am UTC

	centaury_squill 2009-08-20 05:34 pm UTC (link)
	Guh, I didn't know cross-dressing could be so hot! fans self Wonderful job, sweetie! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 02:44 am UTC

	unbroken_halo 2009-08-20 05:42 pm UTC (link)
	Yay! Still adore this as much as I did when I read it on the comm, darling! once again, well done!hugs and smooches (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 02:46 am UTC

	snarry_fan7 2009-08-20 05:48 pm UTC (link)
	I really love this. Harry cross-dressing is so hot and a great weakness of mine. I like how you've written Severus and their interaction is perfect. I love the ending at the ball and everyone's reactions to the various pregnant (or not pregnant in Ginny's case) people is great. Very well done, my dear!!~Sophia (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 02:46 am UTC

	mimiheart 2009-08-20 06:02 pm UTC (link)
	I love this. Snape is so protective, it's perfect. And Harry's uniform is great. :) Well done! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 02:51 am UTC

vividzephyr
2009-08-20 06:24 pm UTC (link)

Poor Harry, so easily manipulated by a selfish Ginny! Thank goodness Severus Snape was there to save him this time.

I loved this. I really loved the corset and lacy knickers!kink Severus had -- that's just so, so hot! And the ending was perfect: the potion revealing pregnancies finally unmasks Ginny's lies and reveals Harry himself to be the one pregnant by the man he's discovered he really loves. *sighs happily* And the short epilogue of family life for them was the perfect ending.

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ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 02:56 am UTC

	igtow 2009-08-20 06:38 pm UTC (link)
	As always, this was lovely... Kinky... Ginny-bashing (smack that bint)... Suspenseful... Hot... I could only wish it was written for 'our' team. Shucks! Seriously, you have a winner here. (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 03:06 am UTC

fancypantsdylan
2009-08-20 06:56 pm UTC (link)

This was absolutely wonderful, the cross-dressing was hot and sexy. Harry was brilliant as the decoy as was Severus as his guardian angel. I loved Kingsley at the end, he's always been a character IMO that was seriously under used. It was hilarious to find Draco pregnant and Lucius fainting was so funny *pets both*. How Ginny thought she could get away with tricking Harry when Severus was in the picture was monumentally stupid. I was totally shocked about who the villian was and would never have guessed. And the sex was just perfect, as always.

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ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 03:50 am UTC

alisanne
2009-08-20 07:13 pm UTC (link)

Yay! It's up!
And it's fabulous, of course. :)
There are so many parts of this that I love, as you know. Lexia Shacklebolt is so much fun *loves* as is the clever way you managed to get Harry to cross dress in the first place. *g* Severus' uncontrollable attraction to him was perfect!
And the SEX! Guh. Hot and fabulous and sizzling as I have come to expect from you. :)
Also? Poor Draco! *giggles*
Ginny is a silly bint. *shrugs* Oh well.

Awesome fic, darling! YAY TEAM CAULDRON!

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ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 03:52 am UTC

house_elf
2009-08-20 07:30 pm UTC (link)

Fantastic! The crossdressing was hot and I loved the end scene with Tristan waiting for his baby to be ready.
But what I particularly liked was the way he just got on with his job as an Auror - I've read many fics where he's either brilliant and heading the division or not backed-up by his colleagues or hates the job but you just showed him getting on with it as part of team, a refreshing change.

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ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 03:57 am UTC

accioslash
2009-08-20 07:42 pm UTC (link)

I *knew* I was going to love this one, and I wasn't wrong! Your pacing was excellent, your characterization spot-on, the mystery intriguing, the Ginny-bashing a bit of a guilty pleasure, and the sex smokin-hot. This was clever (I never suspected Oliver) and funny (OMG, I almost died of glee when Kingsley manipulated Snape into becoming his Head Potions Master) and fluffy (mpreg *swoons*) in all the very best ways. Brilliant! *Applauds*

Good thing this Snitch can't vote. I hate awarding the competition solid 9's. ♥♥♥

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ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 03:59 am UTC

	doriszka 2009-08-20 08:04 pm UTC (link)
	Oh my... I absolutely love this story, like I love all your works! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 04:00 am UTC

	snapechic76 2009-08-20 10:41 pm UTC (link)
	This story had some of my very favorite things: hot wall sex, mpreg Harry, possessive and protective Snape, and my all time favorite Ginny bashing (note the icon)!!! This is exactly how I think of her sneaky, manipulative, lying, scheming, social climbing, no good, controlling....sorry I got carried away there. Well anyway, Bravo! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 06:38 am UTC

	1taintedsoul 2009-08-20 11:09 pm UTC (link)
	Awww. I knew I was going to love it from reading the warnings! Mmmm,Mpreg,fluff,cross-dressing...just some of my favourites. Loved Sev's kind of confession and Harry's naiveity best but adored it all. (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 06:39 am UTC

	montana_dan 2009-08-21 12:03 am UTC (link)
	This was adorable. I loved Snape helping Harry dress while exciting himself in the process and that Harry is squicked until he gets used to it. Snape's trickery at the end is great too. Great job. (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 06:40 am UTC

	hambares 2009-08-21 01:11 am UTC (link)
	Harry crossdressing! Severus loving it! Harry loving the feel of the silk! I had to keep fanning myself, dear! That was utterly perfect and so hot! And a baby or two at the end - loves (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 07:27 am UTC

	zephre 2009-08-21 01:21 am UTC (link)
	this was lovely - just enough tension and fluff to balance out. gorgeous as always! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 07:28 am UTC

	carpet_diemon 2009-08-21 02:42 am UTC (link)
	Whooooa. So many kinks. So little time. Delovely! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 07:28 am UTC

	sweetmelodykiss 2009-08-21 03:06 am UTC (link)
	That was just beautiful. I loved this so much, and Harry in lacy knickers was so sexy. Very well done! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 07:29 am UTC

magialuna
2009-08-21 05:40 am UTC (link)

This story was great in just so many ways. I find Ginny very manipulative and annoying so I loved how you handled her. I thought the build up of having Severus help Harry dress was just VERY hot. Protective Severus was incredibly awesome as was Slytherin Kingsley. The bit with the potion at the ball was funny and sweet - showing the different people who were pregnant and not. Draco fainting cracked me up. And then, of course, the epilogue with the Happily Ever After theme was great. I love when Severus gets to live and have a new happy life.

Great story.

Clare

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ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 07:30 am UTC

	accio_kilt 2009-08-21 05:49 am UTC (link)
	Yeah!! Another wonderful story from you!!! I so love mpreg!! Bad Ginny! And Harry being preggers was a plus, rubbing it in her face! Well done!! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-08-21 07:31 am UTC

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