You two already know how much I liked this. Betaing this was extremely HARD, because 1) there wasn't all that much to fix, 2) it was too easy to forget I was reading it as a beta and not as a reader.
You've really outdone yourselves here. Your style meshed here best. There's the usual eccentric flair {Naga!Voldie, Snidget-the-Mighty riding Snape with Snape's hair, etc.}, but this time, gahh. Everything absolutely fit everything. Tight narration, great Snape voice, AMAZING Harry-turns-human voice {I can't get "Featherless the Giant" or some such out of my HEAD}, and I'm still laughing myself silly over the Voldegini laying eggs and being all maternal about it.
Voldegini was priceless, too. Other than it being kind of horrific, from Snape's POV, I found the whole thing hilarious from my POV as a reader. Kudos on writing parodied grotesque well.
And, as usual, 't was a pleasure to work with you two. You're amazing to beta for, and practically everything a beta wishes her writers would be. :)