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joanwilder aka RaeWhit (joanwilder) wrote in snarry_games,

So...every time I see the Scorpion King or Sword in the Stone, I'll think of you. The first passage is so visual that I was sucked in and couldn't stop (thanks for the nightmares again, btw. :))

Of all the animals you could've picked, the snidget was perfect. I'm not sure anything else could've so easily got underneath Snape's skin. It was endearing, the way he nattered and complained at it, but then ended up so attached. The juxtaposition of the somber state of the wizarding world (and Snape's dilemma) with the adorable snidget gave the entire fic an incredible tension--dire straights versus comical relief.

Snape's interior monologue was so IC, and your narrative description was so perfect that I could picture everything. I loved that he called him Featherbrain--so Snape.

The switch to Harry's POV was so aching and genuine. And Snape, to my pleasant surprise, handled it so admirably. I was afraid that he'd only be interested in 'using' Harry to force a resolution of his own predicament, but your Snape had the integrity to follow through with is years-long mission to protect and preserve him. That they ended up together...well, even if they hadn't, I would've been happy, but that they did was oh so satisfying and right.

The high point of the story was the 'reappearance' of the sword. Honestly, I had trouble staying in my chair; I did pump my fist and hiss, "YESSS!"

The pictures and graphics were so well done and suitably complemented the story, without being overpowering, and the OUTAKE! HAAAAAAA!!!

Great job, you two. I always look forward to your collabs, and I have to say this is my new favorite. And bonus points for using the Snitch so prominently! You get cookies and sparkles from the Team!