"And the creature that lived in Harry's chest, which sought normalcy, popularity, all the things Harry thought he was supposed to want..."
I loved this line and it stayed with me for the rest of the story. Harry constantly trying to negotiate what he wants with what he thinks he should want is a really important process for him and I'd never really thought about that before. That really fits for Harry.
It was also great to see some of the story set in Australia! I've never been to Adelaide but I can sure relate to getting stuck in mungroves. Great story!