What an awesome pairing! Delta/Cruise is my OTP! Oh, and the Snarry was great, too. ;)
Seriously, this is the Harry and Severus I love--a little insecure, and little snarky, but willing to take a risk for happiness! So many things about this story felt comfortable and familiar, yet it never felt cliched. I think your take on the Malfoys, Hermione and her parents, and how Severus survived provided a fresh plot and setting for the developing relationship. And the love scenes (I just can't call them "sex scenes" in a story like this one), where hot, and tender, and just wow! I was reminded of "A Reason to Celebrate," one of my all-time favorite Snarries--I'll be adding this one to list!