This was a veritable fest of teh smut--my favorite scene was the 'fruit' one *drools*. I thought it was great that the very first thing Harry does when he first finds Snape is brew a potion for him. Hee!
Interesting to see Narcissa as the 'wacky' Malfoy, and refreshing to see Lucius as the one with a head finally on his shoulders; all of them still pureblood snots, though. Kreacher I can never get enough of, and you did him so well in this.
A really enjoyable couple of hours, reading this, you guys! You did a great job with it, and I had one 'laugh out loud' moment, and this was it: :)