I fully made a *squee* noise when I saw that this was up. I love the fact you worked the Malfoys in this. Lucius is so perfect. Is it terrible of me that for a second there, I forgot it was Snarry Games and was hoping for a bit of Lucius/Harry?
And the creature that lived in Harry's chest, which sought normalcy, popularity, all the things Harry thought he was supposed to want, had been supplanted by the creature in Harry's pants.
This line. Just perfect. Best line ever. Totally made up for JKR's really silly descriptions regarding Harry's chest monster.