First of all, it's great to read more of your work! You are such a fantastic writer, in whatever genre you choose, and I was so excited that you were on my team this year.
Second of all, this story was fantastic. Your characterization is perfect; I loved Harry, and I loved Snape, and I loved Lily's pov. It made me sad, a little; it was definitely moving. Every time I read something new of yours, I am reminded why I love your fics so much, and why I have so much respect and admiration for your writing!