Aw... that kiss was very unexpected and powerful. :)
I liked the concept of the pods and how very different the Wizarding world views unintended pregnancy. Made me wonder how new the pods are and if it might have been different if Voldie-thing had had a carer that wanted him and let him know it in his pod.
I also liked the slow build up between them, and Snape's utter refusal to discuss the past with Harry. Very Snape-ish. :) And very enjoyable over all. Well done!