Way late to this, and I don't normally read Snarry much, but saw this recc'd and could help it--the original magical ideas here were so well developed, and you did a great job trying to convey cultural ideas that are so different from our "muggle" ones. Must admit my inner feminist wasn't quite happy, but the rest of me was enjoying the story too much to care, really :D Really enjoyed it, thanks for sharing! Would love to read more :D