I absolutely loved this story, just like I knew I would. Harry broke my heart in this - he was so damaged and lost. But I love how you brought everything together for him by giving him a real family in the end. That was quite a surprise for me: I never heard the "James' long lost twin" angle before. I liked it, especially as I had been getting quite worried it would be some weird Harry time travelling thing. And there's no way that could have ended well.
It's a good thing there are no actual audio books produced by Snape, becasue I would never get anything done!
Wonderful job! Thanks for gifting us with such a beautiful, heart-warming story. ♥♥♥