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snarrymod ([info]snarrymod) wrote in [info]snarry_games,
@ 2009-06-20 21:30:00

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Entry tags:free for all, opening games

OPENING GAMES FREE-FOR-ALL CHALLENGE No. 5 from Medal Winning Lilyseyes!
Our next Free For All comes from a medal winning member of Team Dragon in 2008, and current Team Cauldron champion, [info]lilyseyes!


Title: His Champion
Author/Artist: [info]lilyseyes
Thing/Place/Action:Squeaky Shoes/Shore/Walking
Drabble/Drawble/Ficlet/Limerick?:Ficlet ~ 400 words
Rating/Warnings/Kinks: PG *Pre-slash, teacher/student, fluff*
Notes/Disclaimers/Betas JKR owns the Potterverse – I just play in it. No money is made from these amateur works. Beta'd by [info]florida_minxie and [info]whitecotton - thank you so much!








The lapping of waves against the rocks and the rustle of leaves were Severus' only companions as he walked the shore of the Black Lake. His throat was still raw, inside and out, and his hands trembled slightly in the aftermath of Nagini's ruthless attack. Sunlight filtered through the marauding clouds, briefly illuminating the shores, as though rays of hope reaching out to him.

Severus snorted at the direction his maudlin thoughts were taking. Potter's eternal optimism must be contaminating him. Even now, the young wizard should be pleading his case in front of the Wizengamot, although Severus had told him not to waste his breath. There was a cell in Azkaban already prepared for him, Severus knew, and with his luck, it would be the flea-ridden one Black had once occupied.

The squeak of a shoe alerted Severus to the approach of his self-appointed champion. Turning, Severus just managed to catch the boy as the slick leather of a sole slipped on a rock, causing Potter to stumble. Severus was surprised as Potter clung to him, resisting all efforts to set him away.

"You've been exonerated and restored as headmaster," Potter said huskily, looking up at him with a poignant expression.

Holding the green eyes, Severus watched as the pupils dilated with – could it be – desire.. Slowly he arched an eyebrow.

"I appreciate your efforts on my behalf, Mr. Potter, but nothing comes without a price. What is it you want from me?"

The boy's voice dropped to a whisper, edged with something Severus couldn't quite identify.

"I'd… I'd just like you to pretend to actually like me for just a minute."

Resisting the temptation of the up-turned face and full lips for a split-second, Severus gracefully gave into the attraction that had plagued him since the Forest of Dean. The brush of his lips against Potter's drew a needy whimper from the young man, enflaming Severus, who proceeded to thoroughly acquaint himself with Potter's mouth.

Lifting his head, Severus smirked at the dazed look on Potter's face, very aware of the lithe form pressed flush against his. Somehow, one of Severus' hands had found its way around to splay the slender waist, while the other cupped the tousled head, and still Potter pressed closer. The green eyes grew calculating.

"What do I get it if I tell you I managed to get an Order of Merlin for you?"






Thank you, [info]lilyseyes!


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[info]joanwilder
2009-06-20 11:42 pm UTC (link)
See, I've always believed that Snape sneaking about and being a voyeur in the Forest of Dean had slashy potential. And that last line...priceless!

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-06-23 12:03 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]calanor, 2009-06-28 02:06 am UTC

[info]amanitamuscaria
2009-06-21 12:07 am UTC (link)
Hee, hee!
The flea-ridden cell line was great, and Severus resisting for a split-second - the steely control of the man!
But I agree with joanwilder - that last line!

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-06-23 12:04 am UTC

[info]alisanne
2009-06-21 12:33 am UTC (link)
*giggles*
That last line is hilarious. *g*
I love it. :)

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-06-23 12:05 am UTC

[info]eriador117
2009-06-21 03:12 am UTC (link)
Lovely!

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-06-23 12:05 am UTC

[info]gingertart50
2009-06-21 03:29 am UTC (link)
*giggle-snort*

Lovely! I'm sure Snape appreciates Harry's Slytherin side. Hell, I'm sure he appreciates both his sides, and his top and bottom as well. Especially his bottom.

*shuts up now and goes back to writing fic*

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-06-23 12:08 am UTC

[info]vividzephyr
2009-06-21 04:20 am UTC (link)
Ooh, brilliant! I loved it when Snape caught Harry and then the kiss was so lovely. :)

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-06-23 12:09 am UTC

[info]fancypantsdylan
2009-06-21 04:27 am UTC (link)
oh that was lovely, knew he had feelings for Harry, especially after the bit in the Forest of Dean ;-)

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-06-23 12:26 am UTC

[info]majmunka
2009-06-21 04:38 am UTC (link)
Love the whole thing but the last line (and the calculating green eyes :D) are brilliant. Harry can be such a Slytherin (just like Sev is a true Gryffindor sometimes *g*)

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-06-23 12:29 am UTC

[info]florida_minxie
2009-06-21 05:16 am UTC (link)
I've said it before, but it certainly warrants repeating: Last line is total love!

Very good, sweetie!

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-06-23 12:30 am UTC

[info]felaine
2009-06-21 09:10 am UTC (link)
Love Severus catching Harry, and the negotiations.
Poor mistreated Sev. He would get Padfoot's cell, probably with a ghost barking at him.
Lucky Harry is there to save him.
Sweet and tender ficlet.
*coos*
Felaine

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-06-23 12:31 am UTC

[info]hambares
2009-06-21 09:57 am UTC (link)
Yay! I think that is so perfect! Can that be the end to Deathly Hallows???? Please?

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-06-23 12:32 am UTC

(Anonymous)
2009-06-21 10:58 am UTC (link)
this is pure awesomeness! And Harry! Yes! Go get the man that order of merlin! : )

~emilywaters

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-06-23 12:35 am UTC

[info]venturous
2009-06-21 11:52 am UTC (link)
I love you. and them.

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-06-23 12:36 am UTC

[info]leela_cat
2009-06-21 11:54 am UTC (link)
LOL. I love manipulative Harry. So winsome and irresistible. And that last line is hysterical.

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-06-23 12:37 am UTC

[info]fanficforensics
2009-06-21 02:05 pm UTC (link)
What they said. I really wonder what Harry will be getting. In precise detail :)

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-06-23 12:41 am UTC

[info]accio_kilt
2009-06-21 11:18 pm UTC (link)
For an Order of Merlin? I bet I can guess!! Lovely!!

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-06-23 12:42 am UTC

[info]szefi
2009-06-22 01:24 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I'd like to see what he would get for an Order of Merlin! Please?

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-06-23 12:43 am UTC

[info]chiastica
2009-06-22 09:28 pm UTC (link)
I love your pacing - I was all gearing up for it to be angsty for a bit there. And then you threw in that AMAZING last line!!! Lovely work :D:D

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-06-23 12:45 am UTC

[info]stageira
2009-06-23 11:59 am UTC (link)
As always you manage to reduce me to a whimpering mass only with a few hundred words!

This was lovely! Oh Harry, you are so sneaky when you want to! :)

*smishes you*

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-07-08 09:32 pm UTC

[info]ladylark
2009-06-23 12:42 pm UTC (link)
^_^

This was very sweet.

That last line brought giggles with it. Lovely.

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-07-08 09:34 pm UTC

[info]andreanna
2009-06-23 07:32 pm UTC (link)
Awwww, very sweet~ And I love their exchange!

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-07-08 09:34 pm UTC

[info]inoru_no_hoshi
2009-06-24 05:52 am UTC (link)
Touching, sweet - and the last line totally prompted a spate of giggles! Excellent work, fellow Cauldron! :D

~Mara

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-07-08 09:36 pm UTC

[info]whitecotton
2009-06-24 04:14 pm UTC (link)
Enjoyed this one so, so much. That last line is definitely one to make you curl in on yourself and utter a drawn out "Awwwww!"followed by an immediate "Good one, Harry!". Excellent.

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-07-08 09:37 pm UTC

[info]torino10154
2009-06-24 08:45 pm UTC (link)
Last line FTW! However the entire thing was fantastic. What a kiss! Great job.

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-07-08 09:38 pm UTC

[info]snapessecret
2009-06-26 06:06 am UTC (link)
Great as always hun. Nothing I can say that hasn't already been said.

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(no subject) - [info]ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-07-21 07:42 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]snapessecret, 2009-07-21 07:53 am UTC

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