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snarrymod (snarrymod) wrote in snarry_games,
@ 2008-11-05 20:28:00

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entry, pg13, team phoenix

TEAM PHOENIX ENTRY: "For Me To Find" by Dustfar
Title: For Me to Find
Artist: dustfar
Team: PHOENIX! ♥
Genre(s): Romance, Postwar
Prompt(s): Message in a Bottle
Rating/Warnings/Kinks: PG-13
Artist's Notes/Thank you's: I apologize to all UKers for butchering the map of the U.K., and to all Snarry fans for mutilating both Harry and Snape. Many thanks to Team Phoenix for helping me with the pencil scans. Go team! :)
Media used: Mechanical pencils.
Archiving/Usage permission, including the Tribute Video (only after the polls have closed and medals have been awarded): All right for non-commercial use with credit.

Dial up users beware of multiple panels under cut.

For Me to Find, by Dustfar

MOD NOTE: POLL IS NOW CLOSED. THANK YOU FOR PARTICIPATING IN THE SNARRY GAMES.

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	venturous 2008-11-05 07:54 pm UTC (link)
	awwwwwww! hearts I love the close-up of their eyes, and the incredibly squishy moment where H says "Can't I?" with that puppy dog look. heh, how could he resist, at least not for long! (Reply to this)

	hogwartshoney 2008-11-05 08:25 pm UTC (link)
	Awww !!!!!! Enjoyed this, especially the bits where they sat across from each other at that long table and Harry fidgeted ;) (Reply to this)

	snarry_fan7 2008-11-05 08:26 pm UTC (link)
	Very, very lovely and grand work! I really like your style, the panels, and everything. Well done!!~Sophia (Reply to this)

	secretsolitaire 2008-11-05 08:48 pm UTC (link)
	Oh! clutches heart This really is swooningly romantic. :-) My favorite panel is the one of Harry hugging Snape and Snape looking all surprised. ♥ (Reply to this)

	countess_hp 2008-11-05 09:48 pm UTC (link)
	Aww, so romantic. (Reply to this)

	torino10154 2008-11-05 09:48 pm UTC (link)
	Oh that's just lovely. I just love them sitting at the table together not saying anything. And when Severus tries to get Harry to leave-the look of determination on Harry's face is just awesome. Really sweet and romantic. Great job. (Reply to this)

	snowpuppies 2008-11-05 09:51 pm UTC (link)
	The expression on Snape's face when Harry hugs him is priceless! Also, I love that Snape has a sign on his front door that says 'Go Away!' ROF! Nice job! (Reply to this)

	alisanne 2008-11-05 09:52 pm UTC (link)
	happy sigh Yay, romance! g (Reply to this)

	blackcoyote 2008-11-05 10:01 pm UTC (link)
	The way that Harry holds his ground with Snape, and the way Snape softens in the end - you have the romance nailed, great story! (Reply to this)

	dacro 2008-11-05 10:17 pm UTC (link)
	X marks the way to Snape! The treasure! Awesome! Your Harry is adorable. (Reply to this)

	rina_riku 2008-11-05 11:47 pm UTC (link)
	I agree with all the previous comments. I also love the panel where Harry has his revelation and then apparates. I thought that was so cute. (Reply to this)

	nahimana 2008-11-06 01:00 am UTC (link)
	Awwww! So romantic. This is my canon from now on!!! :) (Reply to this)

	jin_fenghuang 2008-11-06 03:19 am UTC (link)
	Awwww! I like your epilogue a lot better than theonethatdoesnotexist. GO TEAM! (Reply to this)

	skygiant 2008-11-06 04:56 am UTC (link)
	AWWWWWW~!!! Love. Love. Love. Snape is such a snarky bastard even in the face of that which he wants the most. Good thing Harry isn't one to give up then, isn't it? :D happy sigh (Reply to this)

	accio_kilt 2008-11-06 05:20 am UTC (link)
	Love this!! Especially the closeups of their faces. Well done!! (Reply to this)

	ariadneelda 2008-11-06 05:58 am UTC (link)
	Very nice! I enjoyed the story and the drawings are lovely. :-) (Reply to this)

glockgal
2008-11-06 10:30 am UTC (link)

nnNNNNNNAWWWWW!! Dude, that is so sweet!! I love the story, Harry's tubborn indignance, Snape's sly Slytherin methods, like he just needs some sort of validation from Harry or something, but he wants to make sure Harry wants to give him that. So very cunning!

I love the 'Go Away' sign on his door *HEEEE* and Harry's expressions are adorable and so very much Harry. Great story and very sweet character design! I really love Harry's hair especially. XD

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	drusillas_rain 2008-11-06 01:13 pm UTC (link)
	awwwwww melts (Reply to this)

	tgin 2008-11-06 02:20 pm UTC (link)
	Awww, this is so romantic. Your Harry is adorable. Fantastic work! :) (Reply to this)

	veridari 2008-11-06 03:14 pm UTC (link)
	I love graphic novels and just felt like I was immersed in one here. Loved your Harry and the ending! (Reply to this)

	estioe 2008-11-06 03:44 pm UTC (link)
	That is so sweet! I love it! Not to mention you're style is awesome. :) (Reply to this)

	sweetmelodykiss 2008-11-06 04:53 pm UTC (link)
	Awwww, that was so lovely! (Reply to this)

	joanwilder 2008-11-06 08:15 pm UTC (link)
	Awww, what a lovely story. I especially liked the frame where Snape's standing with his arms crossed, and all the 'go away' signs. Great job! (Reply to this)

	zephyr_macabee 2008-11-06 08:57 pm UTC (link)
	Very creative take on the prompt. (Reply to this)

	redpiratemel 2008-11-07 12:28 am UTC (link)
	THIS IS SO FANTASTIC!!! Really wonderful. Great storytelling, bravo! ♥ (Reply to this)

	maraudersaffair 2008-11-07 12:41 am UTC (link)
	Aww, it's adorable! I love Harry's hair. xD (Reply to this)

	ariss_tenoh 2008-11-07 02:37 am UTC (link)
	I really like it. It's like a Snarry manga^_^ (Reply to this)

	svartalfur 2008-11-07 03:38 am UTC (link)
	Harry's face when he says, "Can't I?" - so wonderful. Lovely! (Reply to this)

	ziasudra 2008-11-07 09:11 pm UTC (link)
	Awwww.... I really enjoyed the story-telling format of this. I laughed when I saw the "Do Not Touch" in the first panel... as if Harry would ever obey that! And Harry breaking Snape's bullet-proof vitriol of "world revolve around you, blah, blah" with that adorable puppy-eyed look and "Can't I?" I just about melted into a puddle of goo at that point ;) (Reply to this)

	calico_sky 2008-11-08 12:14 am UTC (link)
	Lovely! I like the story you've woven here. ;) (Reply to this)

	verdenia 2008-11-08 03:15 am UTC (link)
	Awww. Super sweet. Great storytelling! (Reply to this)

	dracofiend 2008-11-08 06:02 am UTC (link)
	Ha ha, I bet Snape is thinking, hm, maybe I made that too easy... :D Very sweet. (Reply to this)

	ex_chrysos562 2008-11-08 12:56 pm UTC (link)
	This is a lovely story. It was a pleasure to read and look at. The "Go Away" sign on the door made me laugh. So typically Snape! (Reply to this)

	(Anonymous) 2008-11-08 06:14 pm UTC (link)
	Aww, this is great! I particularly love how you drew their eyes and eyebrows. Idk, I just love it. :D - cassandrathevil <3 (Reply to this)

	centaury_squill 2008-11-09 05:20 am UTC (link)
	Lovely story. You have to admire Harry's persistence. I'm so glad he didn't "Go Away"! (Reply to this)

	fbowden 2008-11-09 06:19 am UTC (link)
	Awwwwwwwwwww!! This is the cutest so far, for sure!! Harry is so CUTE!!!! And Snape too, if one could call him cute lol. I love your style. (Reply to this)

	lampblack 2008-11-09 09:59 pm UTC (link)
	Enjoyed the story and wonderful drawings!!! (Reply to this)

	cruisedirector 2008-11-09 10:08 pm UTC (link)
	I love what you did with this prompt -- very romantic and lovely drawings! (Reply to this)

	lost_stray_cat 2008-11-10 12:24 am UTC (link)
	Oh, I love the idea of Snape leaving bottle with his memories for Harry to find. And especially the way you had it "don't touch", the danger sign on the map, and the "go away". :-) (Reply to this)

	amanuensis1 2008-11-10 05:14 am UTC (link)
	How simply beautiful! Your art is so sweetly pretty, and yet you convey angst with it so dead-on. This seems kind of a bare-bones compliment for such an elaborate piece, but I REALLY love this! hearts (Reply to this)

	shadowess 2008-11-10 11:57 pm UTC (link)
	this is wonderful! I love the scene of Harry viewing the memories, the swirly bits make it very soft and magical. I adore Harry's puppy dog eye expression of "Can't I?" lovely work on this! (Reply to this)

	igtow 2008-11-11 01:31 am UTC (link)
	One of the things that impresses me the most about this (aside from the lovely story) is how easy you make it seem to keep the characters looking consistent from frame to frame, even when they're changed by facial and body expressions. Your characters' eyes say it all. Very nicely done! (Reply to this)

	elvirablue 2008-11-12 10:28 am UTC (link)
	So sweet and romantic. Harry’s instant disapparating made me smile, as did Snape’s “Go Away” sign and the awkward silence at the table. I loved to see Harry’s determination and how boldly he confronts Snape with the truth. A lovely story. (Reply to this)

	szefi 2008-11-14 07:35 am UTC (link)
	This is very lovely and sweet. (Reply to this)

	hpstrangelove 2008-11-15 12:25 pm UTC (link)
	This was so sweet and tender - it fit the genre/prompt perfectly. I like that Harry didn't allow Snape to push him away. I love that hug the best, but every frame was wonderful. (Reply to this)