I love love love love love this so very much. You are my hero when it comes to Character expressed in a few lines... your beach-dwelling Severus with his half-glasses really does me in. I WANT him, arg! scruffy!Harry is just scrumptious. and the kids, they are adorable, and so believable. And such wonderful agents of fate.
I know you worried alot about this, but believe me, even as pencil sketches, the story, the characters, and the FEELING, are all perfect.