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snarrymod (snarrymod) wrote in snarry_games,
@ 2008-10-18 12:33:00

Entry tags:

entry, r, team phoenix

TEAM PHOENIX ENTRY: "Strip Cooking" by Alienor
Title: Strip Cooking
Artist: alienor77310
Team: Phoenix
Email: alienor77310 AT yahoo . com
Genre(s): Romance
Prompt(s): Cooking lessons, Tenderness
Rating/Warnings/Kinks: NWS/R. Unhygienic going-ons in a kitchen?
Artist's Notes/Thank you's: Thanks to Team Phoenix for their input. The handprint on Snape's trousers is for Jin.
Media used: Digital
Archiving/Usage permission, including the Tribute Video (only after the polls have closed and medals have been awarded): All my fanart is copylefted: Copy, reproduce and archive freely, do not use for commercial purposes.

Dial-up users please note multiple panels under cut.

Strip Cooking, by Alienor

MOD NOTE: POLL IS NOW CLOSED. THANK YOU FOR PARTICIPATING IN THE SNARRY GAMES.

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	greenishmaitai 2008-10-18 03:14 pm UTC (link)
	I love how they progressively lose more clothing! Very sexy! And fun, too! I really like the way you captured the happiness of the moment! (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-18 03:39 pm UTC

	skygiant 2008-10-18 03:25 pm UTC (link)
	lol That's brilliant. I think the first one is my favorite because of the aerial view. That's not something I've seen in fanart a lot. :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-18 03:36 pm UTC

	majmunka 2008-10-18 03:31 pm UTC (link)
	g They are cute! (But maybe Harry needs a bit much encouragement :D) The first panel's view is brilliant. (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-18 03:37 pm UTC

	firefly124 2008-10-18 03:39 pm UTC (link)
	Ooh, I like it! (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-18 03:41 pm UTC

	torino10154 2008-10-18 03:44 pm UTC (link)
	Lovely and fun. The first image is great-perfect angle. The progression is fun, playful-the hand print and Harry's finger on Severus's lip are both so cheeky to me. Great job on this. (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-18 03:49 pm UTC

	bruni 2008-10-18 03:53 pm UTC (link)
	Aww, this is sweet! I love how you used the prompt - in fact, I'm not sure I'd realized how much I like the idea of two men cooking together. ♥ I especially like the first panel - the angle, for sure, and the positions of the two in it - but the third is another favorite, especially Snape's tilted back head. :D (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-18 03:59 pm UTC

	zephyr_macabee 2008-10-18 03:55 pm UTC (link)
	This made me laugh. I hope they remember there are eggs on the counter before they get too amorous. (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-18 04:00 pm UTC

	svartalfur 2008-10-18 04:00 pm UTC (link)
	Love the view in the first panel and the print of Harry's hand on Snape's trousers. Great job! (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-18 04:06 pm UTC

	secretsolitaire 2008-10-18 04:05 pm UTC (link)
	Aww, this is lovely! (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-18 04:12 pm UTC

	nahimana 2008-10-18 04:05 pm UTC (link)
	Hehe, very nice! :) Go team! (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-18 04:13 pm UTC

	alisanne 2008-10-18 04:28 pm UTC (link)
	That aerial view was impressive. And the subsequent pictures with progressively less clothing was lovely! g Harry has yummy shoulders. :) Well done! (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-19 03:36 am UTC

	zephre 2008-10-18 04:34 pm UTC (link)
	what a cute, sexy game for the boys! :D and I love their kitchen. wow. the details are wonderful - including that fantastic tile in the aerial view! Nice! (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-19 03:52 am UTC

	snarry_fan7 2008-10-18 05:43 pm UTC (link)
	Lovely, sweet work. I too like the progression of clothing loss through the panels, very lovely.~Sophia (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-19 03:46 am UTC

	athenakt 2008-10-18 05:46 pm UTC (link)
	Hee hee; I love the concept! And the truth will out about the real reason that Snape wears so many layers; so he has added advantages during games like these. ;) (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-19 03:57 am UTC

	venturous 2008-10-18 06:09 pm UTC (link)
	things I love about this: • Snape's receding hairline, seen from above • his smirky look at H's arse, looking quite fine in those jeans, btw • panel 3: happy!Snape, flirty!Harry and the wonderful playful connection they have here. the handprint! and the hands... • treasure trail! Another score for team Phoenix!! (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-19 04:06 am UTC

	calico_sky 2008-10-18 06:18 pm UTC (link)
	Nice work! I love the background details and (like everyone else!) the perspective in the first panel. Great job. ;) (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-19 04:11 am UTC

	countess_hp 2008-10-18 07:19 pm UTC (link)
	Oh La La, damn why can't my kitchen came with these two? (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-19 04:12 am UTC

countess_hp, 2008-10-19 02:27 pm UTC

alienor77310, 2008-10-19 07:15 pm UTC

elvirablue
2008-10-18 07:24 pm UTC (link)

Very sweet and amusing. Stripping makes cooking seem effortless. :) I would definitely cook more often if there was this sort of entertainment on offer to distract me from the boring stuff.

I love the reciprocity depicted in the two middle panels. Mutual lessons always give the best results, as witnessed by the delicious-looking cake.

Severus’ facial expressions are great. The one he has when holding Harry is my favourite. After successful cake baking, he has the nerve to smirk and look straight at me as if to say, “see what I’ve got.” I’m trying not to feel envious...

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alienor77310, 2008-10-19 04:17 am UTC

	spidermoth 2008-10-18 08:02 pm UTC (link)
	OMG! The colors, the playfulness, the hot! I loved the top view with Severus looking so Samurai with the hair! Very eastern looking. Harry's hair is to die for. And his manly back in the second panel is guh! Overall they look so happy. Great work meeting the prompts. I love it! (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-19 04:22 am UTC

spidermoth, 2008-10-19 04:54 pm UTC

	jin_fenghuang 2008-10-18 08:05 pm UTC (link)
	thehhe giggles at handprint ~~and oogles his arse~~ Great job, kitchen smut is very much approved of ;-P (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-19 04:23 am UTC

	shinalaris 2008-10-18 08:05 pm UTC (link)
	Ooh, very hot and tender. I like Harry's hair and the detailed background incorporated nicely into the art. (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-19 04:31 am UTC

	igtow 2008-10-18 08:18 pm UTC (link)
	I think the third panel is my favourite (although the first one isn't far off) because I really like their expressions. And, of course the flour print on Severus' bum. Very naughty of them, really, and one has to wonder how they plan on eating the food. G (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-19 04:48 am UTC

	dementordelta 2008-10-18 09:13 pm UTC (link)
	So much fun! Great job! (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-19 04:49 am UTC

	blackcoyote 2008-10-18 11:36 pm UTC (link)
	Like the romance & the gradual undressing while cooking. The aerial shot in the first scene is a win! (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-19 04:53 am UTC

	akuma_river 2008-10-19 12:02 am UTC (link)
	Interesting, view from the top and then the slow striping of their clothes frame by frame. (Reply to this) (Thread)

alienor77310, 2008-10-19 04:54 am UTC

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