Oh, SO MUCH LOVE for this story! It took me days (and days and days) to read it, but every time I had to stop reading and go tend to RL stuff, I found myself thinking about when I can find some free time to continue reading!
Your fire drakes completely have my heart. They are wonderful, and so perfect for their respective humans :)
(I do have questions regarding the drakes... are the eggs always mated from the same birthing pair? Wouldn't that make every fire drake couple technically siblings as well? Is egg-laying a one time thing, or would Chloe have more eggs in the future so as to contribute to the population increase of the drake species? This whole mythology surrounding the drakes is so fascinating... I want to know more!)
I loved Severus as the owner of the Centaury. I can practically smell and taste the hard work and dedication he's put into his business, earning the loyalty from his masters. And Harry as the leader of STARS is very realistic as well -- I can definitely see him doing something like that in memory of all the loved ones he's lost. It's good to see him mature into a new kind of "celebrity" who's respected for successfully running his foundation.
And of course, it was a delight seeing how Harry and Severus finally got together. A Snarry romance to be savored. Brava!