Wonderful tale, interperse with letters and newspaper clippings etc. The way you weave the canon to fanon... wow! I love it when you place Severus and Harry together, slowly building up to a beautiful relationship. Very nicely done!
... the sad part about Al and S. :( Do they really break it off and never speak with each other ever again? *sobs* By the way, where's the family tree? Would love to see it, so that I know who all these characters are from actually...
Thank you!
Though I spotted a few spelling mistakes, it doesn't make the story less.