Thank you for your kind words, and taking the time to read it. I know it's long. I know what you mean about Ron and the Weasleys. They're okay in canon, but that wasn't what I wanted to do here.
I've been in love with Snape's voice from the first day of Harry's class...even before 'hearing' it with Alan Rickman's tones (which just makes it that much more sensual).
I'm very glad you liked it; I know it won't be to everyone's taste.