Thanks so much, Captain! I'm glad you enjoyed it. The original magic was probably my favorite parts even though they were so difficult to write. It's hard coming up with ideas that make sense, even after a bit of research. :)
Lucius had to be a style consultant; it was the only thing that made sense. *g*
Gus was the easiest part of the story to write, so I'm glad that so many people like him. Thanks again, and sorry I kept you up late with the reading. *snorts*