I can't add much more than has already been said, but I especially liked the slow build-up of love and desire, the snarky-yet-laughing!-Severus, the chicken (and the fact that once he named it, he couldn't kill it!), cat, bread-baking, and the delicious, long overdue sleep at the close.
The tug in the middle of the chest was delightful, and I adored sweet/clueless Harry!