Oh Lin, this was wonderful! I was so looking forward to reading this one, and you didn't disappoint!!!
I'm not a big mpreg fan, yet you always pull it off so masterfully, and you make me believe it!
I love how you made Lucius human. He's not a monster, but he is a pure blood and as such, his lineage will always trump the feelings of others - and to have him do what he did (not mentioning because I don't want to spoil it) showed he did truly care for Harry, in his own way.
You took a very very controversial scene and made it work, and I think the fact that you aren't being flamed left and right shows your strength as a writer - for handing it gently, yet not sparing us the horror of what was done first when Harry lived at Malfoy manner, and then at the dollhouse.
You have created such a rich and vibrant world that I was sad to see it end.
This was well worth the wait and I'm so glad to see you writing in this fandom again.