Aiee!! I love your story, Eey! Snape is so sarcastically himself, and Harry's almost embarrassingly clumsy and valiant. The twins made me laugh out loud, and I fiercely loved Harry's hutzpah in both the beginning and the ending when he stood up against the Wizengamot. And the sex! My god, if you'd ratcheted up the UST any higher, I might've self-combusted! But the big cahuna scene was awkward and hot and satisfying.
I'm so glad you answered the call when you did. Fuckin'-A! Dragon! ROAR!!