I am so impressed! This has to be one of the most fully re-created AR's I've seen done for the HP universe.
Wow. The characterizations were recognizably canon (your interpretation of Dumbledore was outstanding, I thought), Harry was still a Chosen One of sorts, and there was even some semblance of the three Deathly Hallows. But your world feels completely different to JKR's. I love the Victorian/Edwardian atmosphere that you've evoked, with its lovely fusion of science and magic and mysterious young wards. I also love that you twisted it completely away from JKR's stories by building new myths, creating a different social structure and bringing the resulting world to life. I was caught up immediately and enjoyed the entire ride. Well done!