Oh, this is adorable and fun. I approach dialogue-laden stories with trepidation, but you wield it skillfully and put my doubts aside within the first few scenes. Their voices are distinctive, well-suited to the characters, and their dialogue sparkles with ease and humor. Some wonderful light-hearted banter with dashes of description. Good scenes to pick out, and good use of the latest information JKR has given us about the names of the next generation.