I absolutely loved this story! I really like your voice of Snape, and feel like you left enough rough edges, yet allowed us to see a gentle side of him at times. Also love his interaction with Minerva, great version of his relationship with Dumbledore. I very much liked the way you portrayed Harry's kids, gave them distinct and believable personalities. Very good narrative progress, very good mix of dialogue and narrative. For me it was a real... um... cursor-scroller? Whatever the cyber version of page-turner would be, that's what it was! The angst just about killed me! All 9s, that's for sure.