I do apologize for the typos. I was finished up two MAJOR stories (both over 30,000 words) that were due in the same month and I was writing down to the deadline. I had already asked for an extension and didn't want to put the mods in an awkward position. So, yeah, I'll clean them up when I put it up on my LJ. I don't like to see them in a fic, so I understand your mentioning it.
Clearly, I had major issues with DH. I didn't know what I was going to write when I got the assignment, and the challenge became to keep it canon and yet answer all the issues I felt should have been dealt with in the last book that ended up being devoted to camping and another convoluted plot with the Elder wand. Anyway, thanks for the lovely feedback.