Oh this is TOO much fun!! Seems like every time scorpion Snape gets on the move throws me into a laughing fit!!!! I also loved, loved, your Harry, so mature, well-composed, yet still full of passion and energy (for Snape). And the part about Harry letting the impostor kiss him just to see what it's like , I think it was an especially nice touch.
I knew it all along but one more time to emphasize once again, Gingertart you rock!!! And thank you for all the hard work!!